Semi Finalist
Assessment:
Plot/Idea: Coles’s plot is breathtaking, an immense sweep of love, belonging, and self-discovery against a confusing, disturbing world. As the characters struggle to make sense of their universe—and their place in it—readers also will come to grasp its boundaries. The worldbuilding is intensely beautiful, interjected with brief sparks of creepy foreboding, with constant twists that slither unexpectedly through the narrative.
Prose: Coles writes blistering prose, a riveting mix of elegance and eerie curiosities, both eye-opening and reflective at the same time.
Originality: The Limits of My World is a study on humanity in many ways, as Coles’s characters come to the realization that their world may not be as ordered and predictable as they’ve always been taught. That opens the cast up to experience new worlds—and new beings—while giving them a window into their own souls.
Character/Execution: Coles’s skillful rendering of deeply memorable characters makes this novel stand out, gifting readers with a cast that resonates, astounds, and continually surprises. Both Kanan and Tei must fight markedly different, but parallel, battles, and their abiding connection to each other thrums in the background throughout the novel. Kanan’s speed and impulsivity balance out Tei’s well-ordered, thoughtful rationality, making them a perfectly complementary dyad.
Date Submitted: April 01, 2024
WIth prose touched with poetry and charged with feeling, Coles explores the human condition in literal and philosophical senses as Kanan and Tei uncover secrets about their existence, their history, and the structure of a society whose particulars will keep even seasoned science-fiction readers guessing. As Kanan and Tei find and rely on their talents, they unearth strengths within themselves to determine their own destiny outside of the stations they have been told await them in the future.
A captivating story of truth, good and evil, and what constitutes being "human", The Limits of My World lives up to its title, revealing that what the protagonists perceive as the parameters of their existence—including creepy inventions like the “butchery curtains”—isn’t the limits of their world at all. For all the provocative ideas and revelations, Coles prioritizes character and adventure, pitting his protagonists against hard choices (“You live skinless or you do not live”) and the most urgent of questions.
Takeaway: Fresh SF page-turner of identity, dystopia, and fighting for one’s place.
Comparable Titles: Brian Everson’s The Warren; Lauren Beukes.
Production grades
Cover: B
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A-