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  • 04/2022
  • B09XJ3LB87
  • 333 pages
  • $4.99
Raine Leggett
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East Sol: The Sector with the Brightest Sun
A royal noble meets the crown princess while playing in a field of flowers. After fate threatens to pull them apart, she vows to be her strongest ally. To do this she aims to be a magic knight. As she advances in the ranks she finds herself closer to her goal more than ever. As they find themselves together, they grow a beautiful romance.
Plot/Idea: 6 out of 10
Originality: 5 out of 10
Prose: 5 out of 10
Character/Execution: 6 out of 10
Overall: 5.50 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: Leggett's novel integrates clear, straightforward worldbuilding along with some interesting ideas and vibrant details. However, the execution is somewhat labored. The groundwork of a compelling sci-fi fantasy yarn is present, but hampered by a focus on mundane events.

Prose: The writing style is readable, and there are some descriptive passages that offer glimpses of style, but the book is hindered by long passages of dialogue that don't propel the story.

Originality: East Sol integrates a number of sci-fi, fantasy, adventure, and romance tropes to engaging effect, though the work doesn't fully carve out its own niche.

Character/Execution: The characters in Leggett's novel are plentiful and are generally described quite well. However, their development is weakened by clunky dialogue that serves more as exposition than to further their relationships and growth. 

Date Submitted: June 26, 2023

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 04/2022
  • B09XJ3LB87
  • 333 pages
  • $4.99
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