Assessment:
Plot/Idea: Incident at Devil's Finger is a fantastic mystery thriller full of interesting, dynamic characters and a streamlined plot. The storytelling is succinct and convincing, masterfully combining art-world expertise, military insights and technological espionage with aplomb.
Prose: Witham's text is brilliantly realized with an excellent level of detail that enhances the drama and atmosphere of proceedings. His beautifully written language not only emphasizes the dramatic, sweeping Arizona landscapes, but also helps accentuate an excellent level of character depth.
Originality: Incident at Devil's Finger is a well orchestrated mystery thriller that is consistently gripping and dynamic. Witham's very accomplished and confident writing style displays great assurance and promise for future Julian Peale adventures.
Character/Execution: The central character of Julian Peale is brilliantly realized as he navigates the LA art scene and the San Francisco tech world. Peale is bolstered by a vast array of intriguing supporting characters including art patrons, gamblers, hackers, mobsters, millionaires and hippies in an all-encompassing and extremely worthwhile romp.
Blurb: An absorbing mystery thriller.
Date Submitted: May 31, 2024
The mystery that follows finds Witham weaving lively art-world insight with military expertise, hacker espionage, techking rivalry, and more surprises. Castelli entrusts Peale to investigate who would inherit Sophia’s trust if Magnifica were to die, kicking off an investigation into numerous contenders including Sophia’s former flames, Shawn Byrne and Ethan Ratliff—self-made tech millionaires engaged in a long-standing feud playing out at events like the Oracle of Fire (reminiscent of Burning Man). Their battle over futurism and fantasy, druids versus space cadets, extends across games, festivals, art, and philosophies, building to a wild climax, while Magnifica, driven to surpass her mother’s artistic fame, orchestrates her most audacious stunt yet. The cast is further enriched by underworld figures Cyclops and Cyberpunk, adding layers of intrigue.
Peale’s support network—his wife Priscilla, her son Nathan, FBI agent Jerry Snow, and Las Vegas detective William Jackson—collaborate to uncover the dark underside of art in this twisting, of-its-moment thriller. Witham tells the tale with exquisite language, allowing readers to visualize the captivating panoramas of the Southwest, plus persuasive, entertaining glimpses of these extravagant lives.
Takeaway: Greed and betrayal power this gripping Southwest art-world mystery.
Comparable Titles: Joe Mungo Reed’s Hammer, Brendan Slocumb’s The Violin Conspiracy.
Production grades
Cover: A-
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A