Quarter Finalist
Assessment:
Plot/Idea: Freeland's novel is a well-crafted love story with pacing that serves the characters and their journeys well. One of the highlights of the storytelling is the way that new information, specifically pertinent backstory, is revealed when it needs to be and not a moment sooner.
Prose: Freeland's use of quotes from Elizabeth Thorne's diary at the beginning of Jess's chapters and from Meredith Wade on 'Raising Ryder' at the beginning of Gabe's chapters was a very impactful way of setting the tone. Freeland also does a great job of distinguishing character voices from one another and describing both physical and emotional moments well.
Originality: Freeland puts a fresh spin on the fake relationship trope his by making both of her main character's personal stories outside of each other strong and unique.
Character/Execution: Jess and Gabe's journeys from physical attraction to fake dating to actually being genuinely interested in each other are well thought out. It is also notable how they both endure family rifts revolving around an absent mother, albeit for *very* different reasons, and seeing how resolutions were sought. Additionally, readers will be pleased with Jess and Gabe's career journeys as well.
Date Submitted: August 30, 2023
“Un-put-down-able! Delightfully clever. Plot surprises kept me eagerly turning the pages.”
