Quarter Finalist

Assessment:

Plot/Idea:  The Empty Calling is a fast-paced mystery that will hook readers from the start. Though the relationship between Rivien and Justin feels accelerated in places, the story has plenty of twists and turns—and an ending that is both thought-provoking and satisfying.

Prose: The novel's prose is clear and engaging, quickly moving readers through the narrative. There are moments of dense medical terminology, with physician insight that adds intrigue, but Rivien's discourse on moral issues in the medical field is too overt at times.

Originality: The mystery that unfolds is intriguing—and one that will keep readers guessing. The story's resolution is morally ambiguous in a way that will spark reflection long after the last page.

Character/Execution: The Empty Calling has a manageable cast of characters, most of whom have layers of complexity and motivation that steadily unfold throughout the narrative.

Blurb: A page-turning mystery of shocking deaths, remote locales, and riveting twists and turns.

Date Submitted: June 21, 2023