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  • 978-1-64742-100-7
  • 330 pages
  • $16.95
Ebook Details
  • 06/2021
  • 978-1-64742-101-4 B08DKK51XF
  • 351 pages
  • $9.95
Mary Camarillo
Author
The Lockhart Women

Adult; General Fiction (including literary and historical); (Market)

The Lockhart Women is about a working class family living in Huntington Beach, California in the 1990's. It concerns divorce, money, and bad decisions, with the OJ Simpson trial playing as background noise.

Quarter Finalist

Plot/Idea: 10 out of 10
Originality: 10 out of 10
Prose: 10 out of 10
Character/Execution: 10 out of 10
Overall: 10.00 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: An engrossing storyline that sucks in the reader as Brenda's world collapses around her. Fast-paced and set amid drama of the OJ Simpson scandal, this work combines a great plot with strong, likeable characters, and insightful dialogue.

Prose/Style: The author is clearly a talented writer who crafts strong, impactful dialogue that sheds great insight into her characters. A perfect blend of action, description, and dialogue.

Originality: This is an original work with a distinctive story line and well-defined, unique characters.

Character Development/Execution: The author does a fabulous job with characterization which significantly contributes to the appeal of this work. Through skillful narrative and dialogue, the reader is privy to inner thoughts as well as conversations that really convey what makes the characters tick.

Date Submitted: August 21, 2021

Formats
paperback and ebook Details
  • 978-1-64742-100-7
  • 330 pages
  • $16.95
Ebook Details
  • 06/2021
  • 978-1-64742-101-4 B08DKK51XF
  • 351 pages
  • $9.95
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