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  • 01/2017
  • B01N11FG4W
  • 293 pages
  • $3.99
Cindy Patterson
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Chasing Paradise (A Paradise Novel Book 1)
Forbidden Love Paul Fischer's a plain man with big dreams and an even bigger problem—gaining his uncle's approval. He's just settled on how to accomplish that while maintaining loyalty to his family and heritage, when a beautiful Englischer shows up threatening to defeat all his efforts. A romantic relationship with Rachel is forbidden and he soon discovers it will take more than simply guarding his heart. The more time he spends with her, the more he wants to overcome every obstacle that's keeping them apart. Rachel Adam's home was once filled with happiness. It now occupies only painful memories. Even still, she never dreamed she'd have to leave Florida. She's determined to return, until an unlikely attraction brightens her outlook. Drawn to Paul like a butterfly to a flower, she begins to imagine a future in Paradise. A future very different from her life-long plans. A future only Paul has the power to rewrite ... unless a devious plot destroys it first. Chasing Paradise is a story rich in emotion that beautifully portrays love and loss and confronts the difficult question—How far would you go to protect the one you love?
Reviews
Patterson’s first book in her Paradise series surveys how love crosses cultural boundaries. In the wake of emotions surrounding her father’s death, high school senior Rachel Adams moves from Florida to a fixer-upper in Paradise, Pennsylvania, worried about making friends in a strange new place. Meanwhile, Paul Fischer, the young Amish handyman whom Rachel’s mother hires to work on their home, is already struggling with his family’s unwillingness to support his dreams of a construction business, and he fears their further displeasure if he gives in to his attraction to the new Englischer girl in town—and refuses the affections of the Amish girl doggedly pursuing him.

Readers used to the genre will be comforted, if unsurprised, by the novel’s familiarity. Patterson (author of Shattered Treasure) hits all the basic beats of Amish romance, including the acceptable but unwanted pursuer, the slow convincing of potential love, the light gossip among women, and social gatherings with delicious meals. Though positioned as adult fiction, the story reads young, both due to the age and social immaturity of the central protagonists, the straightforward prose and simple dialogue, and romantic connections that are limited to hand holding and a few kisses. Rachel and Paul’s growing attraction exudes a feel-good vibe that carries throughout, even overcoming their minor frustrations with one another, while their visits into each other’s Christian faith traditions shore up the religious message and keep it relevant to the plot.

Patterson uses key background points in both Rachel and Paul’s histories—the car accident that killed Rachel’s father, the friend of Paul’s who was thrown over by an Englisch girl—to reinforce their momentary uncertainty with each other, but Rachel’s willingness to give up college to become an Amish wife feels out of place for her character. Patterson ends with a plot twist resolving Paul’s dilemma and a final reconciliation that’s sweet, if not completely expected.

Takeaway: Enjoyable Amish-Englisch story of first love and new beginnings.

Comparable Titles: Beverly Lewis’s The Heirloom, Shelley Shepard Gray’s A Perfect Amish Romance.

Production grades
Cover: A
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A-

Kirkus Reviews

 "A well-crafted and heartwarmingcross-cultural tale of first love." ~Kirkus Reviews   

Writers Digest

"Author writes movement especially well. There's a nice interplay between characters in dialogue scenes, and author has agood instinct for describing how they move together, angles, contact,along with excellent inner dialogue.Story structure is strong, the pace moves, making reader cares about these characters. The author knows how to do this well! We get real flutters and our own quickened breathing when author uses realism-building in the story line. Well done." ~Writers Digest
 

Formats
Kindle Edition eBooks Details
  • 01/2017
  • B01N11FG4W
  • 293 pages
  • $3.99
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